Friday, October 7, 2011

Journal Entry 9: If you were Billy

            If I am Billy, and I arrive Bath. I will ask the people that live in Billy about what place is best to stay, I keep walking and I see a beautiful boarding house. I will look inside the boarding house, and I can see beautiful inside of the boarding house, but I don't see anyone. I will leave the house and go to Bell and Dragon, if Bell and Dragon cost too much, I will go to pub and I will drink a lot and have a good sleep. I want to drink a lot because I never drink in a pub before. I can also listen to the music in the pub, dancing with people and meet friend in Bath. Maybe I will really have to live in Bell and Dragon, and it will be safe and expensive. It's not a big deal, because the boss will pay me. If I go to Bell and Dragon, I will be safe and happy, I can enjoy the service in the hotel. 

1 comment:

  1. This is much too short. The minimum required length for journal entries is 200 words. If you do not write at least that many words, you cannot receive full credit. This will negatively impact your grade.

    Sincerely,

    M. McCool

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