Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Journal Entry 11: More Freedom

            I think freedom means that you can do anything you want and no one will care about you. I can go anywhere I want, I can drink little amount of beer. I can eat what I want, play computer game, and play sport. I can gamble when it is Chinese New Year. Sometimes I can play what adult can play, like mahjong and poker card. The things I can't do is I can't smoke, drink beer everyday. I can't not eat trash food all the time, like chips,  french fries, McDonald, KFC, and instant noodle everyday etc. If I was addicted to video game, I will get kill by my parents because they don't want me to spend on game all the time. If my freedom were took away, like my computer, my iPod, etc. I will be very angry and I can't really protect it or get it back, because the people who take away it's my parents. I can do anything to fight back, maybe I can hang outside and go home late.

1 comment:

  1. This is much too short. The minimum required length for journal entries is 200 words. If you do not write at least that many words, you cannot receive full credit. This will negatively impact your grade.

    Sincerely,

    M. McCool

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