Wednesday, February 22, 2012

Journal 47: Diamante Poem

               iPod
           Small, Cool
     Play, Listen, Look
Music, Party, Game, Homework
     Type, Smash, Touch
            Big, Fast
             Computer


                Mom
      Annoying, Talkative
     Yell, Scream, Attack
   Food, School, Money, House
     Work, Hit, Shout
         Quiet, Happy
                 Dad

                Water
        Healthy, Beautiful
    Move, Clean, Flow
Sport, Water gun, Seven Eleven, Trash
    Sell, Destroy, Ruin
        Unhealthy, Bubble
                Soda


Monday, February 20, 2012

Journal 45: List Poem


There was a food
It's made with Milk and Cheese
It's cold like Ice Cream
Not as big as a Steak
But shapes like a Cake
They are extremely hot when you take
It's even spicy than Curry
They are make in to bags, so easy to carry
There are more calories than Hamburger
Hot Dog is longer than the food
They aren't like French Fries, a fast food
There color are darker than Chocolate
Who is making my dinner late?
Ooops!!
It's my sister who doesn't know how to cook, got me late!

Journal 46: Acrostic

K-ing of the world
e-raser is his favorite thing in his pencil case
night market is his favorite market
Wii is one of his favorite video game
umbrella is at his right side of his backpack

Journal 42: Ode

           I am going to write an ode poem about homework. I might take ideas like any subject's homework and describe how hard and how much they are. Also talks about how much they have bother me from doing other things. The color of each subject's homework, the shape of a rectangle, smells like paper and i can taste blood when i do it. What happen if i don't do my homework? What happen if i throw them away? what do i get if i finish them? When the teacher will stop giving me homework? Anything about homework could write on my poem.

Journal 41: Poetry

          Poems is different from other from of writing, such as some of the poems are shorter, some of them are hard to understand, some of them use difficult vocabulary. Poems do have similarities, they are all written with words, they are all trying to explain things, or describe story. Poems could be like a song, but i am not sure story. When you sing a song, it's like telling a story, so i guess you can say it has similarities. What makes it same thing like songs and stories, is that songs rhymes just like poem and it's like a story because when people read poems it's like telling a story. Sometimes when you trying to communicate with poem, that is very hard. Just like ancient Chinese, they communicate by saying very knowledge-full poem. Sometimes it could make misunderstood, and now people trying to communicate with poem from now days, it's impossible. We don't have poem learning in class that often, so people start to forget those poem. When you are doing a presentation, you can't use poem talk because people will not understand you. People didn't learn much about poem these days. Now on people try to find poems that is made from the past, which makes poem even more important, because they can tell story that happen in the past.

Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Journal 44: My List

1. Milk
2. Cheese
3. Steak
4. Cake
5. Ice Cream
6. Curry
7. Hamburger
8. Hot Dog
9. French fries
10. Chocolate